Merriol and I have started work in earnest editing the comic book. The first pass through the strips and we'll be working on the text working pretty strictly - though not slavishly - to the comprehensive and well set out rules of comic strip grammar here:
I came across the site last year. I wish I'd come across it earlier. The lettering on some of my earlier strips is just plain UGLY and I'm having to redo them panel by panel, balloon by balloon.
Going to be a bit of a slog but will, I think, be worth the effort.